-Cashier: Can I take your order ma'am?
-Lady: Yes
-Cashier: .... Okay what would you like? *looks at the lady with a sassy look
-Lady: A cheeseburger
-Cashier: What would you like on that cheeseburger ma'am?
-Lady: Cheese
-Cashier: Would you like any condiments or toppings?
-Lady: No thanks
-Cashier: Would you like fries and a drink?
-Lady: Yes and no
-Cashier: Which do you want? *she says with anger in her voice*
-Lady: The drink
-Cashier: Here's your drink ma'am. Your order will be ready shortly. *She says with relief*
-Lady: Cool
Harper, you have a conversation here, but you formatted it as a script rather than the way we talked about in class, which I was asking you to practice here.
ReplyDeleteI think that this dialogue is very realistic and I like it. (: It doesn't only have what the characters were saying but it shows how the cashier said it which I like.
ReplyDeleteI like how realistic it is, and how you challenged yourself with five words or less. Also it's kind of strange that many customers order in a very short fashion.
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